chocolate molten cake

my bro brought back da cake back
from his other home, da one he'll be staying
after he get married nx year,
and here am i,
his beloved white rat,
tasting his firstly made cake.

from the appearance,
it has the colour of delicious chocolate molten,
dark brown, creamy, n even shiny. lol.
it smells nice also and from the look n smell
it's like the cake itself is asking u
" come on, hav a try of me... "

as usual, me,
the food-irresistable,
take out a spoon n scoop at it..


yuxxx...it's all like mud.
too soft, it's like all cream.
can't sense any texture of the cake.
it all juz melt into my mouth in split of second.

i tell myself, mayb da cake isn't
evenly made, so some parts may be better.

so i take another scoope,
n off to my mouth again.
well, dis time i tell my bro,
u fail, try harder nx time.

so tomorrow i'm gonna have another
try outs again. lolx.